RHP : page 34
Written by Kelly on March 25th, 2007
I like the glowy magic horsey panel a lot, but I really botched the rest. I try to cram as much content into each page as possible, I guess in part because it’s a weekly update and in part due to my eagerness to push the story along. This page would’ve worked better with more panels, split over two pages, just to clarify the action and even out the pacing. If there’s ever a print version I may go back and fix it up, but for now it’ll have to do.
I’m hitting the road again, so there won’t be a Roza update for next Monday.
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No update? aww that’s a shame. However usually the pace of the story and of the single micronarrations depends muh over the storyboard pianification of the entire story with whichyoucanchoose where to cut…..it usually end up with a everywhere cut thought -_-…….however even like this your page is clear and mantain a good pace so don’t worry^^
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Haa, I love how Roza is blushing :)
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I really love how Roza blushes in these pannels :)